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Re: A Crack in the Glass - Ch1
#The Big Review
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: One Small Flame
#he Big Review
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit: Chapter 1: Odd Dream
Thanks millions! Very helpful review.
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath
Wow. I can see you really put some thought into this review. Thanks a lot! It's already so helpful. I will look at your points, and will definitely split my ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.2)
Thanks much. Great review here. I'll surely work on my descriptions.
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: Google Q&A
Ha. Well, this was a really interesting and humorous read.
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Life a canvass of oppurtunity
AdjiFlex here. This is like a story I would here at church to bring inspiration. It's not about complex characters or plot twists, but it it touching, and that is ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.2)
Uh...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.2)
oh wow! Thanks for much for the uplifting review. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter (half chapter anyway). I'll definitely check some of your stuff out soon! :D
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes (P2)
well, I suppose this entire book is a spoiler. Heheh
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes (P2)
:D Thanks for another great review! I've heard a number of times that the comic style description doesn't quite fit in so I think I'll make major adjustments where that's ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Sulli 1
This is incredibly good.
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.1)
Thanks for the review. I'll work on making the POVs less confusing.
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.1)
Thanks for the review! Well he felt a corpse because he didn't feel anything. Ever just felt dead before? That's what I was trying to bring across.
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
May 31, 2015
