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Acrius

Acrius

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Blade of affection

    This poem feels like a very familiar memory of what went through my head for a very long time while living with my parents, which grounds the subject matter while ...

    Nov 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Counting Eggs

    Good afternoon. I think it would be better to just jump right into the review and share the hings I enjoyed before I start the speculations and criticisms. The act ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Ants Build a New Chamber

    Good morning. I am quite a big fan of multiple aspects of your poem. To start off, I really enjoyed the little breaks in lines that almost come off as ...

    Feb 18, 2022
  • Art » Narrative, Realistic Re: Am I Ever Enough?

    Hi, Aries. Firstly, I'd like to say that this poem is something that could be felt very strongly by its readers. I think the emotions that you tried to convey ...

    Dec 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Good bye

    Firstly, I liked how your mix of emotions and uncertainty was reciprocated throughout the poem with you unintentionally lashing out at others. I think it gives your poems a very ...

    Dec 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The Missionary's Folly

    First off, I absolutely love the word choice in the entire poem. You clearly have a very defined voice in this poem and its one that I personally find to ...

    Dec 20, 2021


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