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Re: Blade of affection
This poem feels like a very familiar memory of what went through my head for a very long time while living with my parents, which grounds the subject matter while ...
Nov 8, 2024 -
Re: Counting Eggs
Good afternoon. I think it would be better to just jump right into the review and share the hings I enjoyed before I start the speculations and criticisms. The act ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: The Ants Build a New Chamber
Good morning. I am quite a big fan of multiple aspects of your poem. To start off, I really enjoyed the little breaks in lines that almost come off as ...
Feb 18, 2022 -
Re: Am I Ever Enough?
Hi, Aries. Firstly, I'd like to say that this poem is something that could be felt very strongly by its readers. I think the emotions that you tried to convey ...
Dec 20, 2021 -
Re: Good bye
Firstly, I liked how your mix of emotions and uncertainty was reciprocated throughout the poem with you unintentionally lashing out at others. I think it gives your poems a very ...
Dec 20, 2021 -
Re: The Missionary's Folly
First off, I absolutely love the word choice in the entire poem. You clearly have a very defined voice in this poem and its one that I personally find to ...
Dec 20, 2021
