Acid_Fairy

i like it! alot! it was great-and that's putting it bluntly-is it like a greenday type song? you should like sooooo send it too them!

it's...different...but i liked it!

i got a bit mixed up- when they are on the phone- they are actaully talking about their dad, but i put mum in there by mistake.

i wrote another story-but the other chapters were about other characters-and it wasn't so good-ive writena second part i'll post soon.

very good! i thought it was great! really...i dunno...inspiratinal? can't find the right word but you get the picture!

not sre whether i liked this or not....i'm not sure about the 'crick crack the twigs sanp' it might just be me but it didn't sound right.

um...somebody comment...please?

um...i was slightly confused with was......interesting.....

this isn't that good- i just wrote at the cmputer on impulse. it wasn't really thought through. there are lots of typing erros. the bit about the colours of the ...

I thought it was good! i think you did a very good job! well done!

yes-lol i meant angel not angle. i know i should capitalize, but i'm too used to my computer doing it for me that i don't take notice. I'll do that ...

hmm... it wasn't really intended as non-fiction, but i see what you mean. thanks for the ponts guys!

i think it's good! the improvments i had were pretty much covered by others. i do like the last line of your signature poem too though!!! fairy ;-P

that was really great! are you going to post a second part? i really want to know more! It was creepy, and Nudith reminded me slightly of that girl from ...