Abigail_W.

This poem, as with the other one of yours I commented on, is completely pleasing to me. My one suggestion would be to take out the parentheses. To me, they ...

This poem is absolutely wonderful and needs, in my eyes, no help. I love your use of color to describe things that can't actually be visualized, such as prayers. Also, ...

I agree completely with Juniper, so I'm here just to correct some grammatical and spelling mistakes. Laughing to you Ls like crying to others Like pulling out my hair at ...

This is a very sweet poem that I'm sure we can all sympathize with. I must say, though, that the topic is a bit overused, and some of the phrases ...

The idea of this poem is very nice, and I would never think to portray the results of smoking in such a way. In spite of it's overall glorious review, ...

Considering that the idea is a bit overused, (you yourself said it was "basic") this would make a very nice song, I believe. The words are nice, but, honestly, I ...

I like the ending to the poem; it was certainly not cliche at all, although I expected differently, considering the title. One suggestion I might have if for you to ...

The adjectives and the descriptions in this poem were rather lovely, although I'd like to make just a couple of suggestions. : ) May I propose the idea of eliminating ...

I might say that the topic of "best friend" is a bit overused, but, when described with originality, the reader can get the feeling that they have never read a ...

You certainly achieved the goal of making the reader feel your emotions. :cry: I like the repetition in the first stanza, as it adds effect. I have a couple of ...