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Sorry RoarShark, I don't have time to read this right now, but to livurdestiny: when giving reviews, it isn't beneficial to the author and you will be reported if you ...

Hey Wariofart. I know nothing about writing plays, so I can only give you advice on the plot in general. So, you have a good idea. It's obviously unique and ...

Aw, it's so sweet of you to write your little cousin a poem! I really do hope he overcomes his illness and leads a happy, healthy life. Your flow and ...

Hey Becca! Before I do anything else, I'm just going to go through and correct some simple things. Since this is a university admissions essay, the grammar, spelling, and punctuation ...

Hi epseon! I have to say, I'm impressed that you wrote a Shakespearean sonnet. From experience, I know that those are very difficult to write. I love the idea of ...

Hi SubjectBlue! I pretty much agree with everything Jas said about the rhyme scheme and the rhythm. When I first read the poem, I thought I was going to hate ...

Hi tgirly! I'm really stunned by your rhyme scheme on this. It's probably the most uniquely rhyming poem I've ever read, and I think I like it. It's almost like ...

Hey mikepyro! It's great to be able to read something and not have to worry about correcting grammar and spelling, and to top it of, you have an excellent plot ...

Wow, it's obvious you're a gifted poet. The only nitpick I have is that the apostrophe should be after the word "lovers" in the first stanza because you're talking about ...

Hey retrodisco! First off, I'd like to say that I absolutely love this poem. Your imagery here is beyond fantastic. The only corrections I could make would be to keep ...

Hi jujubean! I like the feel of this story, but will there be more? I'd like to see more, and I'd like to know more about this roommate. Your plot ...

Hi CrimsonArrow! I like your poem and I like the metaphors. My only problem is that you use way too many commas. Try reading the poem out loud, pausing where ...

Hey Chanson! First off, I have to say that I really like this. I've written similar lists, but certainly not as detailed or as interesting. Also, I'm only 14, so ...

Hi there! I really like the message of this piece, and I think you chose a great symbol, but it might need a little work. The dried up cement that ...

Hi there! I see you're new to YWS; welcome! I'm sure you'll get some good reviews here, and hopefully you'll do a bit of reviewing yourself. Now, onto the review: ...