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Hi Scutter11! I agree with Snoink, and I haven't read the rest of the play either. I know in screenplay this doesn't matter much, but it might if you submit ...

Hi Drawers! This is a beautiful poem, though I have one overall question. Is this poem meant to be a personification of the abstract concept of loneliness, or is it ...

Hi ASingleDarkRose! First, I'll go through and edit some things ... Faceless people stare at me, my fear showing plain as can be. I think, I hope, I may be ...

Hi TheThing! I'll be blunt here: I really don't get this. I mean, I understand what it's about, but isn't the idea a bit cliche? A bit overused? Just look ...

Hi Kitrosemon13! Well, what Ace said ... I'll just fix a couple things up. Fill the room with my feelings ; I promise the darkness will cover all. You've ruined ...

Oh, my! I hope this isn't true. In any event, I'll go through and fix a few things in red ... Dear Mother, I have never had sex. I have ...

Hi Ladee, and welcome to the Young Writers' Society! First things first, I'm not sure this is a poem. It seems just like a little speech. I mean, there was ...

Hi VeraWinters! First of all, I'll go through and edit some things ... Asher was never meant to be a teacher He was far too open and too kind. He ...

Hi there, HorseradishCares! I like this, and I have just two comments: :idea: 1. Your line breaks are kind of random, making the flow pretty choppy. Try to think of ...

Hi there Timmi92, and welcome to t he Young Writers' Society! I'll just go through and fix some things ... just a hint, though: I might omit your first sentence ...

Hi Meggwriting! I will go through and fix some mistakes first, and then give you an overall opinion ... The glory to behold the sight , Of a guardian angel ...

Before I even read this story, I must strongly recommend that you post a little note at the top of your story saying that you took the title of the ...

Hi Blackbird12! This poem is beautiful, and about such a unique topic! It took me until the fifth stanza to understand what the poem was about, though, so I had ...

Hi there Kyllorac! I like this poem very much, though I'm not sure I'd go so far as to call it that. I could see someone quoting the above stanzas ...

This poem is so poignant -- there is nothing I can say to criticize it, which is one of the greatest compliments you can get from me. I have always ...