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Re: She Blew Me Away
Now I will tell you - Hey, come on, your poem is great for a start. You seem to have a complete idea about emotions and perceptions which is a ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: x - only empty
Hi. Glad to me someone new like me. Welcome to YWS (Well, everyone does the same to me, welcome, I mean, and it kind of seems grand so.. :D ) ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: My Old Friend
Hi. I am new here and maybe it is not appropriate of me to review but I just liked your work and so am telling u :) You have done ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: We Are
You have done an amazing job. I am sure we all can relate to your poem. Your work is original, yet creative and nice. Writers indeed are dreamers and satirists. ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: Toy Soldiers
Yes violence starts from childhood. Hatred starts with a gun in the hands of a young child, trying to act the part of a hero form a movie, or who ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: The Thing About The Cold
Yeah absolutely right. But there are other advantages of being cold too. Like you can be cold and icy to people you hate :D. Then there is the fact that ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: My fantasization that compels me to study
The theme is nice. It actually resembles a story ''Going Places'' where a girl names Sofie fantasizes about dating a football player. Yes, this is different and I liked the ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: ah
It is a nice work. You have done a great job with the contrasts. It would have been more amazing if you would have made it a bit longer, you ...
Dec 8, 2015
