AbbyW

Oh yeah I agree totally this was shit (Excuse my French) it was a mistake writing this I am going to try something different thanks for the feed back

Awesome I can wait to read them

thanks he's watching

Oh yeah sorry this was kidda like a starter for me this is really bad I am slowing and bring more depth to part two and hope you get to ...

This was really cool quite deep and sad. I loved how many way you showed the way you were feeling and what is making you feel that way. I hope ...

thanks for the feed back and sorry I was meant to correct that I need more credit until I can write part two but hopefully I can do that soon

Is was awesome Had me in hooked

It was quite abrupt and confusing but fairly good I liked the ending

Really sad a bit of a depressing ending but really good 8/10

The wording was excilent and I think you did a really good job all round *high five*

A bit confusing but apart from that really good :)