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Hey mystery! First of all I liked the plot but the way you told it was too fast.Readers need to feel relaxed when they read(I know i do).I cant comment ...

Hey Soul! First of all,welcome to YMS!I hope you have a pleasant experience here.If you need any help with something you could ask me or the moderators(green colored username). Your ...

Greeetings kasimkaey! I really really REALLY love your slenderman story!(although it had nothing to do with slender man).The plot was superb and well organized.You described everything very well. Your

Greetings Shulchan! Your Adventure of Conrad story was very dramatic!The conflict that Conrad had and the hard decision that he had to make,his caretaker or a girl he loved?I also ...

Greetings Doodlegirl! I really love reading this!I find the story interesting and funny.I wonder what will happen next? Anyway try to make your paragraph "cleaner".You could leave a line blank ...

Greetings Doodlegirl! I really love reading this!I find the story interesting and funny.I wonder what will happen next? Anyway try to make your paragraph "cleaner".You could leave a line blank ...

Hey Matias! I find your story funny and interesting.Just like etherealember,I would love to see the character develop and your paragraph needs a little cleaning up to do.Other than that ...