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Re: Darkness Descending
Hey mystery! First of all I liked the plot but the way you told it was too fast.Readers need to feel relaxed when they read(I know i do).I cant comment ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: I Don't Know Yet
Hey Soul! First of all,welcome to YMS!I hope you have a pleasant experience here.If you need any help with something you could ask me or the moderators(green colored username). Your ...
Jan 3, 2013 -
Re: Slenderman
Greeetings kasimkaey! I really really REALLY love your slenderman story!(although it had nothing to do with slender man).The plot was superb and well organized.You described everything very well. Your
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: The adventures of Conrad
Greetings Shulchan! Your Adventure of Conrad story was very dramatic!The conflict that Conrad had and the hard decision that he had to make,his caretaker or a girl he loved?I also ...
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: Title in progress
Greetings Doodlegirl! I really love reading this!I find the story interesting and funny.I wonder what will happen next? Anyway try to make your paragraph "cleaner".You could leave a line blank ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Title in progress
Greetings Doodlegirl! I really love reading this!I find the story interesting and funny.I wonder what will happen next? Anyway try to make your paragraph "cleaner".You could leave a line blank ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: This Morning
Hey Matias! I find your story funny and interesting.Just like etherealember,I would love to see the character develop and your paragraph needs a little cleaning up to do.Other than that ...
Dec 31, 2012