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tgirly: Thanks for your honest and insightful review. My punctuation isn't something I am really proud of. But hell I'll learn I guess. It's good know that you get this ...

Haha go easy on me! I"m just rookie. :P But yeah the next one would much better. Thanks for the comment's by the way. Helps me a lot. The poem ...

Thanks you for review. Like said my lack punctuation can be credited to my carelessness. One of my many fault's. But yeah I'll work on it. Will work on the ...

It was a beautiful poem. The imagery was flawless. And the finish touched perfection. Looking forward to the other part's. =)

Writing away: Thanks for the suggestions. All the punctuation mistakes can be credited to my carelessness. I'll make sure I don't repeat this. And thanks for complimenting it. You are ...

This is my first post here. Any comment's criticism will be appreciated.

I loved the poem. Specially since many can connect to it. Great job! P.S. I liked the middle part better than the end. =)