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Re: Be Yourself
Things that I liked: I liked that is was funny. A lot of the poems on this sight are so dark, but yours cheered me up. I hope that you ...
Jun 21, 2015 -
Re: Hello, How Are You?
I like your chorus. It had a good rhythm to the music that was in my head. But it seemed a little too slurred. If this was on the radio ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: Void
Things that I liked: I think that this story is true in a lot of ways. There have been a lot of people who commit suicide because of bullying. This ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: You Can Write Haikus
Things that I liked: It is small and simple. I liked how you were strait, and to the point. It was a good, simple piece that will encourage others to ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: The Dance
Things I liked: I enjoyed the part about the sea of color, it was very poetic how you placed it in after his arms. I hope that this was your ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: I Will
Things I liked: It had character, and was a thrill. I like how you used proper grammar. I think that this poem shows the true evil of abortion. Things I ...
Jun 8, 2015