ATragicLoveStory

In addition to what Razorblade_Saint said, I loved your little "story." Computers tend to freeze or completely "die" at the most inconvienient times. Nice job. It was well written. Stephanie

I really liked this chapter too, Tina. I enjoy this story so much. I like your style of writing in general. Once again, I found no punctuation or spelling errors. ...

I'm actually not sure what else to say. The other people who commented on your poem said most of it. I enjoyed it. It was short, sweet and to the ...

it's realy cute and sweet. at some points i can sing it, and other parlts it's a bit harder.

I like how the rhyming scene and it gives off great imagery. Keep it up. =]

nice story. i love it. =] keep writing like this.

...wow. cute with really good description. i lilked it

yeah, it's up.

Thanks. It was supposed to have a moral. that's all. and how life can be ruined by one mistake.

hopefully there is more to this story. it's so sad. =[ but in a good way.

my favorite one ever. and u wrote this in career pathways class. XD

eh. not my favorite one. it's ok. seems like it needs something...else to it...

you captured the real mind of a teenager head over heels in love. she thinks.

pretty good. i enjoy your other pieces better. this one seems kind of empty. especially the first line. it seems to need something...that doesn't fit the rest of the poem, ...

aww. this is cute. this is what TRUE love should be like. nicely written. good word choice. interesting. =]