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Thank you :) I'll work on it !

Thanks, I'll take your suggestion and go to the local police station. Really, though, this second part was done, on a whim, so a little understanding please :) Thank you ...

Ill put something new up soon. maybe later today :)

Yep. Thanks.

Thank you.. About that "shit" comment, I don't see it anywhere, so can you give me a more accurate description of where it is? I don't remember writing that in ...

Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed this

Thank you :)

Thank you aria :) Its very much appreciated

Hello there! :) Here for a review I'll start out by saying wow. You had a lot of great moments in this piece and I could definitely relate to it. ...

Thank you very, very much Elinor :)

Thank you ( I know I'm way late on this xD ). I was just re-reading through this piece and forgot to thank everyone. So ..thanks !

Hello there :) I'll start out with a few overall impressions. What you wrote was really powerful, touching and certainly defined drama. Great job. A few nit picks Do I ...

Great job, to start off with. I don't think even a dictionary can describe love, although it is there in words. Maybe no one really knows what love is, but ...

Hello there!! :) First off, I'll do my nitpicks, then tell you what I think overall. I do not regret answering that phone call. But at the time it felt ...

OK, guys :) thanks for great reviews. I will change places where it doesnt make sense word wise soon, BUT i will not change the age. This is an actual ...