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Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 4
OK!!! :D I love doing reviews for this story line: - I totally love how you mixed in another character and explained that Logan wasn't in love with her at ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: We never were
Hello, :) I'll start out with the nit picks then we'll move on: - Minor spelling mistake in the fifth paragraph: I think you meant "couch" instead of coach. - ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
I totally agree with every word of this: Writers would die to protect their children. I love how serious and intense this piece is, you really got the point and ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: 500 Words
Hey, I really don't usually read this kind of thing, but you did really good. I like the part where you explain how 500 words is enough to make people ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Words on my Skin
Hey! :D I just wanted to say that I know what that all feels like, so i really felt like this is a good piece. I like how you didn't ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Me?
I really like this piece, it seems to have concept. The beginning really threw me out the window, because I didn't really understand it, but I think I had a ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Dear You.
Worst written story???!!??!?!??!!! I BEG TO DIFFER!! This was wonderfully written and really had true meaning to it: the grammar shouldn't matter to a true writer: just to object of ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
AAH! I swear if you don't kill Asher i will! You have some serious skills on you, chick! Yet again: don't leave me hanging! I do think that you could ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Voids.
depressed your character was. but i have to ask: is this character you? like you specifically? Be careful on how much you put out there of yourself as people tend ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: A Night To Remember
Cute. I think a name for your character was missing, but I like the mystery in the stranger and the dance that made me want to keep reading. Explain more ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Inner Beauty
awww. So adorable. I like how it ends up being her best friend she falls in love with and not her secret crush since kindergarten. Very situationally ironic. I totally ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Caller ID
Makes me wonder. What is he guilty for? Who is this girl? Why didn't he answer? What happened between the two of them? Does he regret it deeply? Please don't ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Spaghetti Secrets
=) a wonderful, sad emotional story. I like how it was a slowly unraveling story how in the beginning he didn't know who it was and whether or not he ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: In the Pursuit of Happiness
Very good. A well writen piece. i didn't quite understand what the italicized stuff meant. But you did a very good job on explaining how Katrine felt and I loved ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Well written! Very sad and romantic, but very very distant. =( It's sad that it happened to you. I have kinda the same thing going on ; you're not alone. ...
Oct 10, 2010