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Re: The Writer
If you haven't written poetry very much, this isn't half bad for a start! ^_^ and I mean that as a good thing. I like how you rhymed the words ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: He Did Not Die in Vain
I really enjoyed reading this. I like how you broke up the lines, it gave it will good rhythm. The only thing I could have wanted more of was rhyming, ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: Idenity of my Independence
Wow, this was actually very fascinating to read. I always love to see other peoples points of view, whether I agree or disagree doesn't really matter to me. On the ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: To be a Raccoon
Hey, the magic happens at 1 am! This was great, well structured, and really funny too actually. :D I liked how you compared the human aspects to the aspects of ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: Lemon Tarts Are Preferred, Sir
This is amazing! Your use of descriptive language is incredible. I adore how you are able to balance action, visuals, and the story, something I'm unable to do. I find ...
May 6, 2016 -
Re: Muffins Make It Sound Complicated
THIS IS SO AMAZING I'M GONNA DIE. *cough* Sorry about that :D Anyway... This is incredible. I love the visuals you use, I used to try to describe the characters ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: window of illusion
Wow, ok I really find this fascinating. I really like how you structured the poem, and I love the concept as well. It seems very dark, it seems like you ...
Apr 25, 2016