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Re: Shattered
First of all, happy you don't feel like this right now! A close friend went through a similar time and I think this represents her cry for help accurately. I ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Hold the Wind
Wow, great poem! I like how you ask a question to the reader at the beginning. By directing the question directly to the reader (Can YOU hold the wind?) it ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Timeline
The first stanza is magnificent. The idea of living the present like a melody is beautiful concept, I think it's my favorite line is your poem. Today is the first ...
Sep 1, 2013