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Re: Flakes
Thanks for reading it. I'll explain what I was trying to convey that you didn't understand, "Lightly drop the silken sparks, Lost in a world gray and stark," Here I'm ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thanks for the uplifting words. In answer to the first confusion you had, when I said, "Lost in the expanse as none seem to rhyme," I can see what you ...
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Re: Flakes
Thanks for taking the time to read it.
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Okay, lol. Thanks.
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thank you very much. And yah, the last line is a little out of place, but I sat there for about half an hour trying to figure out what to ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Threatened by the dragon, saved by the snake
Yah, the publishing program is messed up. The best thing to do is make sure that it's formatted in a Word.doc like you want it, then save it and upload ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Riddle of the Heart
Hey, don't worry, I need all the help I can get.
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Riddle of the Heart
Lol, you always find a typo in my stuff. I keep saying I should make sure I take care of those but...nah. Anyways, thanks again for the review, and glad ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: My favorite Poem..
Well, I like the poem. It's short, sweet, and there's not anything to dislike, but it's not yours so it's not like anyone can review it. This would be a ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Mirror
Well, your words are definitely true, and you conveyed your feelings well. Like I said, good job :)
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Nightmares
Thanks for the welcome, and the nice words about my poem. I'm going to be honest, I didn't know I was good at poetry, but everyone says it's good.
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Fallen-Book the First-Chapter Two
Actually, I need to change the comma to ... . I'm trying to break up his thought process. Thanks for noticing though, I'll fix it right now.
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Fallen-Book the First-Chapter Four
Thank you.
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Nightmares
Thank you.
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The City of Stone
We all have to start somewhere. I'm happy and willing to help, so if you ever need anything, reviews or advice, just message me.
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