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Re: .
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you actually thought there was something here. I've read a bajillion end of the world sci-fi titles, and this one's kind of the same ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Riddle of the Heart
Thanks for the review, and I agree, it is short, but I've always liked short poetry, and I write what I like. Maybe I should "broaden my horizons" though?
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thanks :)
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thank you for the review. I understand what you're saying about, "Lost in the expanse for none seem to rhyme." I've had to explain this to every other person that ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Label me
You know what, I take my words back about Spoke Word form not being poetry. I guess if the definition of poetry is expressing one's feelings and thought through the ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Label me
I see what you're saying. But the entire premise of spoken word clashes with the definition of poetry itself, not to mention the heart and art of poetry, no offense. ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Camp Tiburon (Chapter Two)
Are you going to write more?
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The Fallen-Book the First-Chapter Five
First of all, I could never get sick of your reviews. You always point out some things that I need to change, and you're always complimenting me. There's nothing to ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Internal G.P.S.
Lol, short and sweet and sassy. I like that you explained the meaning behind it, otherwise I wouldn't have a clue. There's not much to say about the poem, sine ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thank you for the review. To put to rest the two parts where you were confused, the color Gray is spelled Gray. Grey refers to a name, usually, but can ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: .
Thanks for the review. As usual, I'm not surprised you found some errors. But I'm also surprised that you liked it, since it is kind of slow, and long. It's ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Too Good to Be True
Lol, it's just awkward for guys to talk about things, because guys are awkward. In any case, I would do things like him, like being more worried about the girl ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Thanks.
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Riddle of the Heart
And, as for the typos, I always have those. I also sort of agree with you one my choice of the word "chosen" but I wanted to add to the ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Riddle of the Heart
The answer is Love. What else.
Jan 18, 2014
