AEChronicle

Nice work! The choice of words is brilliant, as it helps you to picture everything. The combination of ink and honey is what I like best. It brings to mind ...

Well written. It's about love. Simple, sweet, yet to the point. You have a good combination of words to complete the rhymes, but not change the feel or the concept ...

I like the eclectic feel of the end. Death is such a nasty subject in most cases, but a "blissful sleep" doesn't sound to bad. Everyone should die at night. ...

This is wonderful. It brings to light a very important idea, that our bodies are beautiful, but in a sort of, nonchalant way. My favorite line would have to be, ...

I have to agree with haylesbales, bloody brilliant! I don't know if all of the typos were deliberate, but whether or not they are, it fits perfectly with the idea ...

I liked it. The over all feel is definitely fantasy, and I like the few tidbits that tie the book to the traditional, High Fantasy genre, but it also reminds ...