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Re: Potential
Another (my second) poetry attempt. Any and all reviews, criticisms, and tips are welcomed.
Oct 19 -
Re: Write
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and even more so that you found it relatable. It's reassuring to know that others struggle with the same thing. ...
Oct 14 -
Re: Write
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Out of frustration with my writer's block, I quite literally wrote whatever came to mind and ended up arguing with ...
Oct 13 -
Re: Mourning Akibu (experimental fiction)
You've caught me being simple-minded. Thank you.
Oct 1 -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
Thank you for the review. I’m delighted by how thoroughly you’ve begun dissecting Michaud and am enjoying your developing theories. I think your criticism of the repetition is fair. It's ...
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 1st Letter
Thank you for the review. I won’t confirm or deny anything about Michaud’s circumstances just yet. As for “recherché,” I was borrowing it as an English adjective in the sense ...
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 1st Letter
Thank you for the review. I am exceedingly pleased that Michaud’s ramblings have received such serious consideration. Your thoughts on the stranger, particularly the possibility that Michaud is simp
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
Thank you for the review. I’m glad you’re curious about his circumstances. I’ll leave that unanswered for now. There is certainly more to learn about Michaud as the letters continue.
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
Thank you for the review.
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
Thank you for the review. I’m very glad you enjoyed this letter, and especially glad that Michaud’s philosophy came through as intended. I delighted in developing the ideas from the ...
Sep 27 -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
My ego is about to burst. Thank you for the praise. I can certainly see how you relate to Michaud’s voice from this review alone, though I have read your ...
Sep 26 -
Re: the mess of me
My interpretation centers on a mother/daughter relationship. The narrator’s love for reading/writing is deeply connected to her mother, as if she has inherited part of her through the books. While ...
Sep 25 -
Re: The Man of god
Thank you for the review. This was not a direct representation of the Adam of the Bible, but rather my own inspired character. However, I agree with, and perhaps even ...
Sep 19 -
Re: Persecution
This is my first attempt at poetry, and I am rather unfamiliar with the form. I would appreciate any criticism, particularly regarding structure, imagery, and rhythm. I ask you to ...
Sep 17 -
Re: The Man of god
Thank you for the review. His self-importance and rationalization were the aspects I was most inspired to explore, so I am pleased they came through as intended. I did not ...
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