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many thanks for your review! I think you're right about the many characters introduced at once. Do you think it might have been better if say one of those characters ...

oops i realised it didn't keep my formatting of indenting new lines and speech, oh well XD

thank you so much for your kind review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

thank you so much again payton!!! i love your reviews, and they mean a lot. You're so right again in your interpretations; this is kind of a post-apocalyptic scenario, the ...

thank you for your kind words and review! I deliberately chose not to capitalise the i to symbolise that in this sort of post-apocalyptic scenario he is not important anymore, ...

wow thank you so much payton!! you always nail it with your interpretations!! it feels amazing to be seen through my work, if that makes sense. i must read some ...

awww thank you!! i'm not sure how clear the connections between all the poems are

thank you so much for your lovely review! you're so kind, and i love your interpretations, you really got the vibe i was going for which i worried people might ...

thank you!! it really means a lot

aw thank you!

thank you! i did realise it seems unclear as to what i mean; it's more so a reflection of power/war/soldiers, and how soldiers are used by the people in power, ...

thank you so much for your kind words! I'd be interested to know what you make of it; though I had a meaning in mind, I am a big lover ...

thank you! You'r3 right, it is about not belonging in your body and struggling to communicate that. The 'when i ate the mold' title comes from one of my favourite ...

thank you so much for your kind review! I definitely want to revisit this piece and maybe even write a full short story about the man and finally give him ...

i just saw earlier that there was another chapter so best believe i shall be reviewing that next!!