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I know how you feel, I always end up in a situation like that whilst writing poetry.

Ooh I'd love to hear it! I've never actually written something with another person before so it could be a new experience for me lol

I always do the opposite lol! I tend to skip dialogue and go straight to the description aha, I feel like we'd make a great writing team :-)

thank you so much again, because reading this I felt like I completely over-reacted at the last review. I'm kind of not having a great time lately and just needed ...

Thank you so much! I'll try add in some more of her personality when I go back to edit :-)

Honestly no I've had time to think about it, I'm just being stupid. I asked for a review and that's what I got! If I were to actually try get ...

Thank you lol. I'm thinking that basically I am going to just write the whole story, go through and SEVERELY edit it and then re-upload it onto here when I'm ...

Thank you so much :-) This honestly made me smile, you're so sweet!

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...

Thank you again, but i'll be blunt as well: this was really upsetting to read. I know I asked you to review and honestly I am so grateful that you've ...

Thank you again for the review, it was really helpful. Though there are some things you critique that I disagree with - I guess we just prefer different styles aha ...

Ahhh thank you so much for this, it's honestly been so helpful. Obviously this is only a first draft so I haven't yet gone through and edited/re-worded it, I'm just ...

No problem, I'm actually going to go and read the previous chapters now!

No problem, and thank you for writing it and giving me motivation!