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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    thank you so much! Oh, lol, just a thing, my username is actuatllt 4revgreen not 4ever!

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grace

    Thank you so much!!! Honestly this has made my day, and probably my week too!

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grace

    Thank you so much!!! Honestly this has made my day, and probably my week too!

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    thank you so much! A lot have people have said about the punctuation so that is definitely something I will work on! :-)

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Three

    thank you so much! And i will take all of that into account when I edit :-)

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn

    ahh no problem! I tend to have the same problem with long sentences myself :-)

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grace

    Thank you for the review! I tried to hint at the fact that Spike is not mentally stable, that he has schizophrenia or something like that; he heard the trees ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Should we still pray?

    thank you so much! And don't worry about sounding harsh; everyone needs a critic!

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Bonetaker Chapter 3

    Thank you so much! Honestly it means a lot to have your opinion on this :-) Hopefully I can expand on the story more when I get round to it!

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    oh, and with the thing about the parentheses, I'll try to explain: Basically, it's meant to be read out loud, and it's something you'd say in a different tone of ...

    Apr 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    Thank you so much!

    Apr 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    Thank you so much!

    Apr 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The train station

    Thank you for the review! Hopefully I will get round to writing some sort of conclusion to This one day aha

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: Macbeth

    thank you so much!!

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: Macbeth

    ahh thank you for the review! Yeah I love studying Macbeth too!

    Apr 25, 2019


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