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Thank you! And yeah, this wasn't meant to be as fast paced as it was but I didn't know how else to write it, aha. Mum was still trying to ...

Thank you :-)

No problem! And don't worry - I never spot typos in my own work which is why I love this site!

Thank you for the review :-) These are actually song lyrics, rather than a poem, which is why there is a lot of repetitive language :-)

I'm avoiding the trope of a depressive and hopeless story! The present day chapters will be more depressing but there will be a happy ending I promise

hmm, well you've said about bars on the windows so you could compare it to a prison, or say there's like ugly looking statues or gargoyles or something? You could ...

Hopefully adult Cas will become more likeable at the end as I'm hoping the story is like a 'journey' of mourning the reader goes on with her and by the ...

Thank you for catching my typos again! And yeah, she's not very likeable in these present day chapters which is why I have those in the past to balance it ...

Thank you for the review! And as for the 'ignoring me' that's a typo whoops, it should be a comma after me. :-)

I'll read it when I have the chance :-)

That's a good idea - that's what I'm doing with my story too! :-)

He was meant to be whining, because who wouldn't whine when a baby's been sick on you XD

All he said was "JJ threw up on me. Again." lol like what's 'teenagery' about that? When my brother was a baby my parents would always be complaining about him ...

I don't see that as a stereotypical teen thing though? aha

that sounds good!