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i chose to write the story this was as the first chapter begins with the aftermath of the riot described in this part lol. The first chapter is posted if ...

thank you so much for your review! The bird people are just the like, care-free people dancing around on new years eve, as the speaker of the poem is sat ...

yeah, i mentioned that at the top. Each chapter is intersliced with a police interview. This is the prologue lol.

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thank you! i really wanted to write about her dream but i had a word limit as i wrote this for an assignment so maybe i could add that in ...

thank you!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

oh aha yeah i've found YWS always deleted my stanza too! it was still amazing regardless :-)

thank you so much for your review! i'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

Thank you so much for the review! And thank you for spotting the typos and places i need to improve, they really help my editing processes!

The story is about a young woman named Elizabeth who believes that the world is going to end on Christmas day. She tries to warn her aunt and uncle, but ...

thank you so much for all your feedback! it means a lot!

I'm glad! I'm sorry I didn't offer much in the way of feedback or constructive criticism, I just really liked the meaning and symbolism behind your words!

Thank you!

thank you so much!