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That's a good idea - that's what I'm doing with my story too! :-)

He was meant to be whining, because who wouldn't whine when a baby's been sick on you XD

All he said was "JJ threw up on me. Again." lol like what's 'teenagery' about that? When my brother was a baby my parents would always be complaining about him ...

I don't see that as a stereotypical teen thing though? aha

that sounds good!

Oh damn. See that's what confused me! I think you need to clarify that a little more as if it's 2:38am I'm gonna assume he's in bed.

Thank you for the review, and for catching my typos/grammar again. And Castle's dad - idk about you but my dad talks to his kids differently than he does to ...

I won't, I promise!! XD

He doesn't come back until series 3, but it's worth the wait! What he did before then is explored in Torchwood.

When you do, you can talk to me about any episode at anytime! I honestly can quote literally every episode, it's kinda unhealthy.. same with Torchwood, the spin off about ...

YOU REALLY NEED TO WATCH ALL THE REST AHHHH!!!!!!! You've never watch any David Tennant, Matt Smith OR Peter Capaldi episodes??????? They're all on BBC Iplayer David tenant has some ...

What did you think of the latest series? I saw so many people hating on Jodie Whittaker online, but I thought it was an improvement from the last series she ...

I love long sentences. I'm guilty of it myself! But your sentence is a lot of information for one sentence and considering the genre you're writing I'd keep them from ...

I can always put together a little word document or something with how I come up with descriptions, as it's not like I have much else to do ! Usually, ...

Ahh, okay. Maybe you could give some little helps? Like, Isaac himself acknowledged that it's a little weird for him to be working for them?