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Thank you for catching my typo's and for the review

Yeah I use google docs too, and for some of my longer pieces it can be so annoying to go through and add in italics, ugh

%u201CCastle, you%u2019re one of my kids,%u201D The emphasis on that one word made all the difference. Two things. One, this is a really touching moment. Perhaps the most touching moment. ...

'we're moving house' is just a shorter, more casual way of 'we're moving to a new house' when people speak they don't conform to grammar rules lmao or we'd all ...

That's weird lol. Like, when I moved house I would say to my friends 'I'm moving house tomorrow' or 'I just moved house' because if I were to say 'I ...

Thank you! And yeah, this wasn't meant to be as fast paced as it was but I didn't know how else to write it, aha. Mum was still trying to ...

Thank you :-)

No problem! And don't worry - I never spot typos in my own work which is why I love this site!

Thank you for the review :-) These are actually song lyrics, rather than a poem, which is why there is a lot of repetitive language :-)

I'm avoiding the trope of a depressive and hopeless story! The present day chapters will be more depressing but there will be a happy ending I promise

hmm, well you've said about bars on the windows so you could compare it to a prison, or say there's like ugly looking statues or gargoyles or something? You could ...

Hopefully adult Cas will become more likeable at the end as I'm hoping the story is like a 'journey' of mourning the reader goes on with her and by the ...

Thank you for catching my typos again! And yeah, she's not very likeable in these present day chapters which is why I have those in the past to balance it ...

Thank you for the review! And as for the 'ignoring me' that's a typo whoops, it should be a comma after me. :-)

I'll read it when I have the chance :-)