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Thank you so much! It means a lot, and thank you for correcting my mistake XD

Thank you so much for the review! It means a lot :-) As for 'twenty two going on forty,' i meant that she's twenty two, but she looks like she ...

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That's alright, I've actually changed the ending and carried on the story so that it makes more sense, I'll upload that sometime soon

Thank you so much! It was meant to be that her body was under the bed and this whole time she and ian had been ghosts, but I wasn't sure ...

Thank you so much!! This really means a lot

Thank you so much!! This means a a lot, really

thank you so much! This is really useful feedback, i really appreciate it

Thank you so much! This has really helped, since the things you pointed out are the things i struggle with most when it comes to poetry!

thank you so much! Yeah, I'm never sure how to structure my poems so i just kinda write it and hope for the best.

thank you so much! Sorry for the late reply!

thank you so much, and i am so sorry that my reply is so late oml

Thank you so much

Thank you so much for the review

Thank you so much for spotting my typo's as always.