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  • Lyrics » Narrative, Other Re: Psychopaths Get Bored

    thank you so much! I will be sure to share them, and sherlock is well worth the rewatch XD

    Jan 29, 2021
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: Body Dysmorphia

    Oh man, this is something I really relate to, having Body Dysmorphia myself have struggling with it for many years. You put it into words almost perfectly - it's always ...

    Jan 29, 2021
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Other Re: Psychopaths Get Bored

    Wow thank you so much! That means so much to me!

    Jan 29, 2021
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Other Re: Psychopaths Get Bored

    thank you! i totally forgot to check all the grammar as i was writing it oops-

    Jan 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: An Unlikely Pair - Part Two (1826 words)

    thank you so much! It really means a lot! The 'no you're not' is meant to be part of her kind of inner conflict, almost like she is talking to ...

    Jan 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Mystery / Suspense Re: Check in - 2559 words

    thank you so much for the review! If i'm honest, i wasn't really sure about the ending other than I knew I wanted Cecelia to be dead the whole time, ...

    Jan 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Expired Eggs - Part Two

    I wasn't actually planning on writing any more but I might since I've got some ideas now!

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Silent Sakura - Chapter 1

    You're welcome! it was a beautiful piece, my old english teacher would have loved you aha, she very much liked descriptive writing which is probably why i used to do ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: An Unlikely Pair - Part one (1814 words)

    Thank you so much for the review! And for your suggestions, they really help :-)

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: just eat

    no problem, and that's great that you're doing better! :-)

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Expired Eggs - Part One

    Thank you so much! And yes I've been meaning to put their thoughts in italics, I always forget when writing aha

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Expired Eggs - Part Two

    Thank you so much! The reason the narration shifts a bit is because it was originally meant to all be Ian this time but I didn't like it changed it ...

    Nov 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Expired Eggs - Part One

    thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot

    Nov 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Expired Eggs - Part Two

    Thank you so much! i will look into your suggestions!

    Nov 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Mystery / Suspense Re: Check in - 2559 words

    Thank you so much! Your feedback is much appreciated :-)

    Nov 17, 2020


Thou call'dst me a dog before thou hadst cause. But, since I am a dog, beware my fangs.
— Shylock, The Merchant of Venice