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Hii! I really love your poem, and i'm here to leave a short review today :) Opening with: flick flick and closing with flick flick why. Is a nice way ...

This is such a tender and beautiful poem with some amazing natural imagery running through it. Your parenthetical asides (the parts inside the brackets!) do a lot of heavy emotional ...

Hi Anne! I'm so happy you wrote this poem and managed to post it. I hope you had a happy review day! I see that alliyah and Hannah have already ...

Hi again! I am excited for this piece. I love Five Nights at Freddy's (have you seen the movies? I've only seen the first one, and although it didn't keep ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! This is a really nice poem with nice imagery and emotion running through it. It's very melancholic and has a vivid metaphor of the rose as ...

There's really good escalation here with the beat-by-beat rescue attempt. The stakes keep rising cleanly, and we are also get introduced to Felicia, who is a nice human touch amid ...

okay I'm lowkey running out of steam so trying another review format so I don't lose my thoughts! Something Good: The paragraph with the Farhjura/Astoria comparison is my favourite of ...

I am going to just do a proof read type review for you, as I spotted a few grammatical things so rather than focus on a story I don't know ...

aaa you will have to forgive me for going in blind to your work. I hope i can get around to reading the other parts at some point soon! I ...

A real strength of this chapter is how well Bellum's manipulation is executed. The internal voice in Shadow's head is genuinely insidious, especially as it's framed as reasonable. For example, ...

Hi! So I apologise that I haven't read the previous chapters; I hope that one day I can get round to doing that! From what I can tell, this is ...

Hii, I apologise I haven't read the rest of your chapters, and I will try to get around to that at some point next week! I'll do my best to ...

Hi again Creeper!! I agree with Tikaya below that this feels a little rushed, with many short chapters that could have easily been a few longer ones, but the story ...

Hi, I'm aware you really want others to read the previous chapters, but I am a bit worried that no one will end up reviewing this on this glorious review ...

We aren’t walking anymore, we’re running now. 'We aren’t walking anymore; we're running' is a more impactful way to say this, using a semi-colon for the impact! Like always, you've ...