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Hi Creeper! Hope you are doing well

Hi! I read this when you first published it and loved it so much, I knew I had to come back and give it a review. I like how you ...

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I thought this was an interesting analysis of an idea, and you've done it in a little amount of words ...

Hi June! Happy RevMo. You've been killing it with your reviews and poems lately! This is a very heavy and sad poem. You detail the feelings so beautifully, from just ...

Hello! I am back again to review chapter 7! There was A LOT happening in the chapter. I did really enjoy the GREAT Grim Reaper part the most; it also ...

Hi Alex! I thought I'd look through old poems for my RevMo checklist, and this title stood out to me, so here we go! Firstly, I can heavily relate to ...

Hi, welcome to YWS and congratulations on posting your first piece! This is certainly an interesting concept to explore. Your own childhood not being good enough, missing out on the ...

I love how this piece really builds up tension entirely through physical detail rather than exposition. It's a really nice touch and a nice change from a lot of stories ...

Hello Creeper! I've been looking forward to the next part of this, so here we go. The imagery here is really strong and creepy, especially the part with Isobelle, which ...

Sorry it took me so long, i wrote a bunch and lost internet and it hadn't saved so if i remember anything else i'll come back and edit this XD ...

Hi! Sorry it took me a while to get around to this part. I like how distinct all the characters speak and feel from each other; it makes it easy ...

Hi Creeper! There were a few nice, short chapters. Not much happens, but Jessica is looking for Poppy, and there is a terrifying wing master who seems to know what ...

Hi Junebug! This is my favourite poem of yours yet. It's one I heavily relate to, and though I am way out of high school now, the feelings still weigh ...

Hi, this is a really lovely poem with beautiful imagery that builds up a scene very vividly in my head. I often think these same things when I am reading ...

Hi Creeper! This was a nice short collection of tales. Most were about Annabelle, and it might have been nice to compile all the Annabelle stories into one, then do ...