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Re: Roxy Ann, Part Two
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:42 pm
I complained about the protagonist. Yet I think he is simply the narrator of events now. Though the underlying meanings and sense was deeo enough to entangle me for quite ... -
Re: Asking the Time
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:34 pm
This seems like a really heavy way to end the story, in my opinion. The Chinese New Year part was also something new that I think should have been introduced ... -
Re: this poem doesn't apply to the blind and deaf persons of the world
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:18 pm
Uh, I assume this was copied from a WFP commentary? I always have to double check work I've written in a jam or something, haha. I think the repetition drags ... -
Re: Beginning
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:10 pm
I loved your usage of metaphors throughout this poem. The way you used imagery was a good way to describe things and really made this stand out. I particularly liked ... -
Re: Jack's Torment
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:08 pm
So first off this was a really well written poem, your riming was spot on and I was really impressed, not even I can get it that good. So well ... -
Re: Satisfaction (SPOKEN WORD)
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:08 pm
So, I liked this, and I'm sure many other people would enjoy it too, but I feel I should give my own opinion. I know not all poems have rhyming, ...