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Hey Storygirl, I really like this piece! You have a very original, flowing style to your poetry, and the emotions you convey are extremely vivid. Although, maybe this is just ...

Hi Gladiator, I'm here as requested, and I'm sorry to say that I didn't make it too far into the story before I stopped reading. There's nothing really wrong with ...

Well, there's not much I have to critique you on with this poem, because it's very origional and there's nothing I would change. I like it. This sort of thing ...

Hey ehte, I really love this. First of all, your last stanza is perfect; don't change a thing. Second, I don't really understand this pair of lines: She is stuck ...

Hey rubberduck, I really like this. Your wording was clever, and your figurative language was fantastic. If I say I love you with all my heart, won't my love size ...

Hey Solvalery, Thank you for asking me to review this excellent poem! I think that your poem has a good length and the wording is unique. And I write this ...

Hey Lumi, I'm sorry that I really do not have much constructive criticizm for you. This is partly due to the fact that much of what I would have said ...

As was said in the two reviews before me, it takes a really talented writer to be able to produce something so raw, moving, and blatent in such a short ...

Hi Flyaway, welcome to YWS! How do you make a word tell a story Of a unexplained murder Or a thrilling adventure ? How do you make a syllable Shout ...

Wow. This poem is really unique. I'm sorry I don't have much constructive criticism for you. When this poem starts off, the reader feels like you are describing someone you ...

Hey Megs! I have to say that as with "Girls", your writing is very unique. You have a way of explaining things and gripping your readers into a flowing and ...

Hey Rascalover, I'm here as requested. First off, I love the fact that even though I havn't read the first chapter of your story, I can still grasp and like ...

I love this! A reader can tell that you are an excellent poet by your word choice and how well the structure of your poem works. If they should know ...

I am here as requested! This is truly increadible, and it is incredible because as pazey13 pointed out, this idea is 100 percent origional. Just one thing, are you trying ...

Very good! I really liked it, It was short, simple, and raw. The fourth line in your first stanza should read "that it can never be bought". Also, I'm not ...