3-Damentional

At first glance, I had the reaction that you were probably looking for; "WTF is he talking about?" Like the previous commentator, the last line is what cleared the whole ...

I really enjoyed this poem. The first line really inspired me to read further as to why the wind must be fast. I view it as kind of humorous how ...

Applause, applause, applause and more applause. This was nearly perfect. From the very first until the very last, I was compelled to read. I love how you never actually gave ...

I like how you use the term "real talk" and based a piece around it. I have to say that I like the concept but the delivery was really off. ...

This poem is very creative in its word usage with your multiple references to how the wind moves and whatnot. You had a good opening but in the third and ...

Overall... I liked this piece of work. One of the things that I love about it is that it makes you put some of the pieces together yourself while remaining ...

Excellent imagery. I can't figure out if they were in love because you only said that they were friends. I wish that you would have gone more in-dept with how ...

I, too, enjoy the imagery. I saw it in my mind wonderfully. I'm not sure if it's just me or not but I failed to see any pattern whatsoever. It's ...