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Re: -Inconcessus- Fifteen
Hey Ash! :D Guess what? Sela likes coconuts. :wink: CHAPTER FIFTEEN “What are you doing here?” I blurted before I could stop myself. Isaac looked amused. “[s]Hi[/s] Hello to you ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Do these even exist?
The Gemma Doyle Trilogy by I forget the author's name? Libba Bray. Yeah, those are pretty interesting. And original, I might add. I would suggest Jellicoe Road by Melina Marchetta. ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Three
Hello, there! How's it going? I'm excited to read this, so let's begin! :D So, this will be the last 'filling in' chapter, as such, as I'll be getting onto ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Fourteen
Woo-hoo! All hail the Queen of the Cliffhangers! :lol: I'm back! I liked this chapter much more than the last one, especially because of the information Elena gives us and ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Thirteen
Hey, Ashley! Alas, again I am slow. You always seem to catch me when I leave town. :wink: Well, since Angel, Night Mistress, and Rhi took care of the nitpicks, ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Two
Hey, Luce. :smt039 Just thought I catch up on your latest. And unfortunately, everyone else has taken care of the little nit-picky things, so I will comment only on my ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Why, hello there. I'm Sunny! :D I'm writing this poem now, that it may drown out the sound* [s]the sound[/s] of silence creeping, The bell that tolls at dawn. * ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twelve
*sigh* Well, looks like Angel and Sela and Lucy have taken care of everything. I was gone last night, so I didn't get your PM till this morning. BUT - ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Fog
Hey, Erb. Try reposting this in Other Fiction , instead of other poetry. You'll get more responses that way. :) Oh, and also space your lines out more, double spacing. ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Vertigo
Across mountains Of godly-green I dream back And remember. And over roads Of unending velvet I am reminded Of you. Excellent beginning. In fact, these first two stanzas are my ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Eleven
Dang it! I'm getting slow. Well, Angel's done all the nit-picking, so I'll do . . . the other stuff. Whatever it's called. :lol: Description: I didn't see much description ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Russian Roulette
Wow. Well, everyone's done all the nit-picking already. I really liked this. The present tense suits it well, like all these things are happening at once, and they are all ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Ten
Aw, snap! :smt087 Lucy beat me to the rest of the review. Ha, just kidding. :) I'd finish the review I started, but after reading through Lucy's, it looks like ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Ten
Woo-hoo! :smt041 I love it how these chapters keep on coming! And I'm excited to hear what Isaac has to say. :wink: Nate was in room 25 on level three. ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Looking for good books (preferably vampire)
Sunshine by Robin McKinley. A very original vamp story, not like Twilight or Dracula or Anne Rice or any of that. Also The Silver Kiss by Annette Curtis Klaus, the ...
Mar 14, 2009
