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Hmm. Great ideas! Thank you for your review, I will try to add some of those, I know this draft is far from perfect :) -Caroline

Thank you, that is extremely helpful! I would like to use some of those tips, and I will. :) -Caroline

Authors Note: This came to me on a whim, and I wanted to write it out right away. Through this story I was trying to show the need for many ...

Authors Note: This came to me on a whim, and I wanted to write it out right away. Through this story I was trying to show the need for many ...

Thank you for your comments :) This was my first poem, and I just wrote it on a whim so thank you for your kindness. I will try to work ...

Thank you for your reply! It means so much! Honestly I wouldn't have been that dissapointed if no one liked it because it just came to me in the middle ...

Just my little bit, I think it would be a good idea also to split up the pragraphs a bit, as a reader I know I always get discouraged when ...

Just my little bit, I think it would be a good idea also to split up the pragraphs a bit, as a reader I know I always get discouraged when ...

Also, I know I left a lot of questions, and unanswered stuff. I was hoping that I would be able to show that a sk advanced the plot in the ...

Also, does anybody have a gootitle idea for the story? I really want to change it, but don't have any good ideas. Thanks!