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Re: Forbidden
The title is very effective, I mean who wouldn't want to read a poem names "Forbidden". I found this poem very enjoyable and light-hearted to read. I like how every ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Stuck
Woah, this is the furthest thing from bad. I like how each line is short and to the point yet i you still portray the pain so cleverly. "I use ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.
This poem was so powerful. i admire the way you started off on a tone you intended to keep throughout. I admire the way we see that the child has ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Deer, My Dearest
I thought this was so clever. I liked the description, how you said It was about your dearest friend because I was expecting an average poem about your friend, but ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
I thought this was a really interesting piece to read. At first I thought Adam was a young boy, but the amount of thought he put into answering the question ...
Aug 22, 2013
