1Weirdsituation

Nice story idea. But the first paragraph describing the setting, you use a lot of unnecessary words. Like when people accidentally use the word Whom in the wrong context. "The ...

I definitely agree that this would've actually happened. Except in real real life, there with be no fairy god mother. Therefore, ~ her life would be way worse~ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#

WARNING: this might not make a lot of sense. I'm new to this review thing. So...here it goes... Nice idea overall. But firstly, there's a couple of misspelled words like ...

This is a very lovely poem! However, I don't think my interpretation is what you're actually trying to portray. But to me, it's about a girl who died at a ...

I really like this. The title instantly made me think of Miley Cyrus. And I definitely agree with this. Almost everyone with a singing career sing about their problems and ...

You're an amazing writer and this chapter was interesting. I like how throughout this chapter you explained how she is insecure and at the end you came back to the ...

Hey what's up? It's me here to review you there... wow that was lame. Anyway, This chapter is very good and well written. The beginning confused me a little though. ...

Ooh... twisted and sadistic- very. I like how you introduced the story. It lets the reader know what typed of characters he/she is. But it's very sadistic... Sorry I really ...

Hey hey hey. It's not fat Albert- This is 1 weird situation with a review! ... Your story so far is exceptionally great. I love the setting you started it ...

Pretty interesting so far. I like the way you started the chapter. Beginning with the creator and all that. This section makes the reader want to know what happens next. ...