1738RemyBoy

I appreciate the critique! I'd love to hear your thoughts on the rest.

Hello Que! Thanks for the review! I enjoyed your insights as well as your advice on how to potentially improve my writing. I will be honest, this is an older ...

Thanks for the review, vampricone6783! I just wanted to say that the man in the metal ball didn't blow up by himself, rather Montago shot him with black fire. I'm ...

These were really good critiques! I will definitely be writing them down. This novel definitely has "first draft" written all over it. I'll be honest I get wordy because I ...

Oh that makes since, might have been a misundertanding on my end though. And no problem!

Love the review! Power-Jack's behavior will be heavily integral to the plot and RatKing will be expanded upon further, along with the wolfman (he has a name).

Thanks for the insight!