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Hi! Let me start off with saying this is such an incredible piece you've written and you should be so proud of this work. You have painted such beautiful imagery ...

"If I feel so deeply, then why do I feel nothing at all" - I probably reread that line at least five times. This poem, what you wrote is absolutely ...

hey first off this poem is just so emotional I felt like I could feel what you were feeling and were in your shoes for a mere moment. as for ...

So first off, this poem is absolutely incredible. It's also very unique, the poem seems more like you're venting in a way. I haven't seen this in poetry in a ...

This piece is amazing, and you can feel the emotion behind it. The only thing I recommend you do is adding a bit more from “Tethered to a brain” and ...