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Re: Life (for school, need reviews ASAP please)
Hey Wolf! I really liked your poem! The one thing I noticed was the words you used, they really made it all flow nicely. I personally think you descibed these ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Anne Rice's vampires
So the 9th book is the last? I'm thinking of ordering all the books, but I'm a fast reader.. so I want them all at once. Haha. I haven't read ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1-The Queen
Oooh I really enjoyed this piece. I couldn't find too much wrong with it, one thing: Even in this massive uproar , footsteps could be heard as they marched through ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: The Beginning((prologue rewrite))
Helloooo I really liked your piece, it was very interesting and absorbing. I really liked your descriptions. In my opinion they were vivid and not overly descriptive. The one thing ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: West of Forgetfulness River
I was quite drawn to your story. However, I am a bit confused. Maybe you should explain what she's doing away from her homeland more? Unless of course you decide ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: The Diamond Ground
I really liked your piece. There was a few things that I noticed, He spun the rough box in his hands, surveying each and every side thoroughly. I like this ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: The View From A Hot Air Balloon
Wow! This poem was beyond captivating. I really enjoyed it. I couldn't find any mistakes. However, there was this one line that I didn't really flow in my opinion; Across ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Dream on Thunder
Wow! I really loved this poem. The title really grabbed me, and at first I wasn't sure about the poem, but then it really striked me as unique. I liked ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
(Yes this all really happened to me, don't worry though, there is more love story on its way I promise.) Wait what? This actually happened? :? Well anyways, this was ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: I am Changed.
Wow, this is a really neat idea. I liked how the poem flowed and the language you used. I did notice however that this poem could be about anything. If ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: The truth about celebrity.
Good poem. It seems like you really knew what you were talking about. :wink: Mostly every thing that needs to be said has been said, but there was this one ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Writer's Block revised
I think is a really interesting idea. It was well written, but I think you should use more desciptive words in some parts. Also there is something about this one ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Wuthering Heights
This is definately one of my favorite books. It was surprisingly good. I figured I would have been bored after the first little bit, but I enjoyed it. I can't ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Trickster's Choice
I think these were some of her best books. I can't say I really enjoyed some of her other pieces. But Trickster's Choice and Trickster's Queen were really good. I ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: The Blinded
I really like your poem, I like how you spaced it and the message was really clear. It made a strong picture in my mind. There was one thing though, ...
Apr 1, 2008
