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Hey, I was lurking your progress thread and thought I might help you out by reviewing something for you. :3 It was interesting! I had to read it over a ...

Hi there! I'm gonna review this now, m'kay? Like Pheonix said, this is pretty much one big information dump. Some interesting information, but still more of a dump than anything ...

Hey! Over all, you did a good job of writing horses, most people I've seen have a tricky time making them sound realistic enough, but this was good. Your description ...

'Ello! I'm gonna try and review this! (Bear with me, I'm still a newb at reviews.) First off, it's a very interesting story so far! I've read the first two ...

Hey Tigerwolf, I'm gonna try and review this :) It sounds really interesting, though the 'dark lord' thing is a tiny bit cliche. I know this is supposed to be ...

The idea is really great and I liked it. The way you wrote this made it sound almost poetic, love that! This planet was once like ours, but had now ...

First off, it sounds really interesting. Really drew me in. Rocks lodged into her already cut feet, the pain was intense. Lodge seems an odd word to use. (at least ...

You sound angry, but the way you expressed it was very well done. There wasn't really a rhythm, most poems have some sort of rhythm. As said above periods and ...