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The beginning of this story was great. I really liked the idea that global warming eventually eradicates the seasons and humans are confronted with the reality that it's too dangerous ...

I'd really like to hear more about this story - more about the girl's background and what happened to her parents. It sounds juicy :) I would go back and ...

This almost bought tears to my eyes. The concept is brilliant - here are two girls that he had once loved, and he had to choose between killing one or ...

I like the story. I'm going to assume though that English is not your usual language?? Please don't take this the wrong way -it's just that some of the words ...

Hey there, I like the concept of your story - it shows great potential. I think the others have commented a bit on things that you could touch up on ...

You always come up with such cool ideas for short stories, they're so much fun :) I love the way you write. It's so easy for the reader to immerse ...

Hey Wolfpaws! I think the other two comments pretty much cover what you need to work on. I just wanted to say though - at the beginning you said " ...

I absolutely loved this. I'm so excited at the prospect of reading more. Pleeease keep writing, I beg you. If this were a book I would buy it. Keep up ...

The Troll sounds vile. Just as I would expect a troll to be :) The description was good, I had no problems with visualising the creature, but maybe you could ...

I felt the emotions in this piece were slightly confusing. They were constantly changing. At first the night is mocking her, I would take this to be a negative thing. ...

Oh wow - WHAT a cool concept :) It's so nice to read something creative and original for a change. This story kept my attention the entire time. Well done ...

Hey yumyums. Let me first say I love your name. yumyums. it makes me giggle :P I really liked this piece. Not just because it reminded me of my boyfriend ...

This is just plain twisted. I LLLIKE it!!!! =D You definately have a warped imagination ;) something I can relate to. I love it when writers/directors mix the innocence of ...

What do you meaaaan this isn't very good?! I certainly liked it. =] I'm very curious. What were they?? Ordinary homicidal maniacs?? Or something more supernatural..? Either way I found ...

I really like where you're going with this story. Were you planning on expanding it? The idea of living for such a long time is one that appeals to me ...