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Thanks for both your reviews (: Em can I just clear up that despite the dates, it isn't actually supposed to be a diary >.< The prologue, chapter one and ...

This was sweet, definetly sweet (: I thought your description was really nice. For the majority this read very prose like, which mainly work, especially in the third and fourth ...

Ah well thanks again for another brutally honest critique ;) Yeah the whole phone/call thing is just to do with country, so it'll just be staying ;):P

Thanks (: The first version was just the same to be honest.

Was this supposed to be purple prose-y?

Ah well thanks for you honesty and pointing out of some very silly mistakes on my part :D(the whole how many days in a year thing, didn't really think there). ...

How very true... >.

That's pretty much exactly right (:

Somebody review please?

OK I agree with what you are saying about punctuation and agree it needs to be revised. However you said it is just a lot of images. It is an ...

Thanks never noticed this typo. Yeah the ending isn't complete yet and probably needs the most work. Byt yeah thank you all for the positive feedback (:

Thank you everyone for your comments.

Alright thank you (: I shall check that out at some point!

Thank you for all the great reviews xD But I am going to continue to leave you all feeling lost.

This is brillaint. I love how you know who your audience are for this poem. I loved the simplicity and the cuteness of it. I wouldn't change any of. It ...