I know I've already posted this but I just wandered if it was too short to be considered for publication?
I feel intimidating.
I won't beat you up, but, I could bring you down.
Because of my full speed, no traffic lights mouth
You wouldn't know where to go
Then again, it would be bad for me too.
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The first version was just the same to be honest.
it might be a bit short to be published, but i guess it depends on where you where thinking of submitting it...
i didn't read the first one you posted, so let me just say that i really liked this, despite it's length.
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