*singsoffkey*

oh... right... sorry. That's what I meant. :oops:

Well... I know that they are pirates. So, it does make sense if I give it thought. However, it kinda caught me as off while I was reading. I'm not ...

*is very excited to see another chapter up* !!!! 4 comments: 1. LOVE IT! (hehe) 2. Watch those typos dear... *shakes finger at Dusky* 3. You refer to Clinion and ...

The plot thickens... Two things: firstly, I don't understand how Elana failed to pick up that Falcon is one of the Valeen. I mean, I know that she sees her ...

ah... the destinction between groups of people and the people themselves... glad to see someone, if only a fictional character, who has got that figured out.

No one has replied to this? How can that be? I love it. I'm sad we missed their wedding though... any chance of a flashback?

But. Um. Who worries about seemly or decorous? Do you? um... yes... Is that bad? I'm always not doing or saying things because I'm afraid of making an idiot of ...

awww... this is making me sad...

This is hilarious! I am a Michelle Branch fan... apparently no one else here is... but that doesn't keep me from enjoying this. Very creative. *thumbs up*

You guys keep commenting on my writing skills. I'm very happy that you all enjoyed this. I did too and this is certainly flattering. But as Sarah pointed out, I ...

Thanks for all the comments and compliments.... wow I didn't expect this many responses. 8)

Thank you for you enthusiasm. :D But really I would love a total critique with all the shredding that you see fit. This just kinda fell onto paper today because ...

Wow... I need to come back periodically to make sure I don't miss things. I kinda thought the commenting was done. But, thanks a lot Angel, and Snoink, that is ...

aww... thanks guys for all your comments. I'm soooooo glad you liked it. Wow. I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. I'm going through a bit ...

This... is... so... freakin'... scary. I am now totally suspicious and terrified of anyone I met/will meet, on the internet. *screams*