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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Faith (an excerpt)

    Hiya, Maddy! Invisible hug to you for requesting a review :D Although Rosalie beat me to it I'll try my best. Here goes: On the harsh, concrete floor I sit, ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Distraught: Chapter 2

    Hiya Day, thanks for the email :D So you were right about this being uneventful, perhaps you could have broke it down with the point of view of the assassin ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Button (12+ for war/violence themes)

    Hey there, Pandora! Well, I absolutely love this! Your writing has this wonderful flow that had me glued from the very first sentence. I'm really looking forward to reading more ...

    Jul 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The McBride's: Generations whisper Chapter1

    I like this, it's got a bit of a Vampire Diaries feel to it but with a twist. The only thing I'd suggest is to work on some of your ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Sick (Critique more than welcome!)

    Hey, WhiteRoses! Coco here for a review. I hope I can help! Rated for blood, violence, language, zombie horror, and some disturbing scenes [*rubs hands in excitement*] . No nudity ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Title Why Not. Chapter 3: A Night Or Rather Morning Out

    Hiya, Tigz, here I am, as promised! Hopefully this helps! Samantha Ah finally those new albums and bands are noted down I think to myself as I sit back in ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Singer- Chapter 1

    So I haven't read the prologue BUT I enjoyed this. I read 'King Uther' and had wonderful images of the BBC series Merlin, I don't know if you've heard of ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Title: Why Not. Chapter 2: Just A Regular Day part 2

    So it looks like you've already got one great review. I agree with a lot of what she said, especially regarding the emotions and the plot. You need to go ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey Jackle, Coco here! So I'm really glad I came across this because it's really REALLY good :D ! I loved your character narration, the way it oozed with personality ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Title: Why Not. Chapter 1: Just A Regular Day

    Hey Tigs, Coco here! I completely agree with everything the other two reviewers picked up on, they've made some great comments and I think it would be good for you ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The party - chapter six

    Hey, Ofir, back for chapter 6. I really hope this helps! "I raised both eyebrows. "You don't know what you're talking about." Ben's mouth turned a grim line. He picked ...

    Jun 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Distraught: Chapter 1

    Hiya, Day! Coco here as requested. Hope this review helps! So I'm a total sucker for medieval stories, to me they're like brownies, I can't get enough of them! I'm ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sinful Pride - Chapter 2 (Revised)

    Hiya Kyou! Coco here as requested. I hope I don't dissappoint! Here goes... Death… I was afraid of death, my senses sharpened from my imagination. My chain-mail glove on left ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dead to me. (A taste to see what you think)

    Hiya, Biffle! Coco here as requested. Hope I don't disappoint! Okay, here goes... Everything was bright. The walls, the lights, the bed, the furniture. Everything. That wasn't me. So, I'm ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: How to Grow a Demon

    This is really special: gritty, sharp and absolutely intriguing. It's been a while since I read a story that had no faults, you grabbed my attention from beginning to end ...

    Jun 23, 2010


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