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  • LadySpark
    Aug 30, 2011

    hi. Um. I extended a contest for you. you have yet to enter it.


  • DrunkOnWriting
    Aug 6, 2011

    hey! hope you're doing alright! chapter 7 is up :)


    DrunkOnWriting and so is chapter 8:)
    Aug 14, 2011


  • Balaczter
    Aug 4, 2011

    Just a note to say thank you very much for the wonderful review! I'm just going to edit the document through now. :D


  • DrunkOnWriting
    Aug 3, 2011

    hello:) if you're interested, i just posted chapter 6.

  • Thanks for the review :]. I am pretty awful at grammar, even worse about typing so fast I make weird mistakes. Apprichiate you pointing them out for me in that chapter though!


  • Dreamwalker
    Aug 1, 2011

    Thank you for the review on my piece!

    But, and it kind of disappoints me to say, it wasn't really about arrogance. In fact, it was in the complete different direction. Maybe I should rewrite :/


  • n1o2u3r4
    Aug 1, 2011

    Thank you very much for your constructive review.


    anasn2 you are most welcome. Always glad to help
    Aug 1, 2011


  • GeneralKaseyDaBomd
    Aug 1, 2011

    Thanks for reviewing and correcting my work. I'm a very, very, very young writer and have a lot to learn about writing. I will fix the errors that you pointed out to me. I actually wrote the chapters fairly quickly, so I can understand all the errors that there are.


    anasn2 You are most welcome... I'll keep reading your work, you are very talented. Always glad to help :)
    Aug 1, 2011


  • WrittenInStone
    Jul 29, 2011

    Thankyou for the review, I do understand that I am having troubles in the area of punctuation but that is the main reason I posted my piece up on YWS. I was hoping that there would be a user to aid me in fixing the problem.


  • DrunkOnWriting
    Jul 24, 2011

    Hey! I just posted a new story, and your opinion would be greatly appreciated!


  • 322sivart
    Jul 20, 2011

    Thanks for the review!
    *follows*


  • paperbackheart
    Jul 20, 2011

    Thanks for the review. I am mostly writing about the pleasure of death. I actually think there are less of those, though I need to also give the scenario also. Sorry. I suppose the stanzas are a mess. Sorry.


    anasn2 No need to be sorry, i only criticize to make you better. All the best dear :)
    Jul 20, 2011


  • DrunkOnWriting
    Jul 18, 2011

    hey! thanks for your comment on "Graceful Warrior", it made my day:)

    I am putting this story on hold for the time being, since it was pretty impulsive and I'm not sure where I want to go with it. Thank you for your support, and I plan on having a new story up shortly!


    anasn2 I loved the story so much. It grabbed me right from the start you see. Its a shame that you do not know where to go next with it, i'll follow up on your work. You seem quite talented:D
    you are most welcome.

    Jul 18, 2011



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