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**This has gotten way to confusing. I'm sorry guys but I'm gonna have to drop out. Everything moved to fast and I'm completely lost. :( **
If I can impact one person, just one, with my writing before I die, then I've lived a great life




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Sorry moonlight

And sorry for the confusion I privately pm'd Forever and asked her to tell me her plan on her victory and I approved it. Boltgamans post can't be changed now because it's stuff like that that confuses people. Yin can win the the next battle.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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lordyyy...
The one who smiles the most has something to hide.

..i'm lonely...message me..some how add me on your social networking site (unless you are some creepy weirdo who stalks girls for their organ harvesting company..i personally like them inside of me thankyou :) )




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Xander~

One battle had been one, but I knew the war was just the beginning.

*Short, yes but I'm just trying to revive it.*
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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I would post but I can't at all this week as I'm trying to win a contest in which blue shall prevail. (huh? oh course.

we rock,
you know we do.
as hard as you'll try
you can't beat blue!
*waves pompoms erratically*
)

Sorry, done with pep rally.

So yeah. Sorry.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~




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Brenden~~

That night there was a banquet. Everyone went but me. I didn't know why but I didn't want to. i just sat in my room for some reason i couldn't figure out. eventually I left. I walked into the woods that night, just wandering. The sounds of the woods were mystic. And I bent them so i would always here some over others. i eventually found a clearing. the sounds were best there, the loudest. But also the harmony blended perfectly in this spot. Then i heard a crunch that could only come from a human stepping on a twig. i looked down to check my necklace but it was gone.


*ques forever*




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I'm sorry!! I can't post right now! I'm on a frantically reviewing so we can win the purple vs. blue competition...

beep


we rock,
you know we do.
as hard as you'll try
you can't beat blue!
*waves pompoms erratically*


beep


That was the automatic cheer-o-matic that always goes off when I mention the... what I just said... shhh.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~




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Xander~

The Queen of our nation and the King of their nation decided to have have a conference. Both nations had lost a lot of people, and this was there attempt to make piece. They were going to try to come up with a treaty. Which they called the treaty of Chi.

The King and Queen of course brought several Bishops and Knights. Brenden and Jade sat next to me along with others behind our Queen. The same group of Bishops and Knights I saw before sat behind their King. The girl from before was glaring at us, and occasionally her dirty stare shifted to her king.

The meeting was held in what was known as the crease. The thin line that separated the two nations. Equally spaced between the two kingdoms. At the center of the crease was an ancien temple. Where our two nations had once combined to destroy a dark force that had plegged or land hundreds of years ago.

"You're not getting our diamonds," The queen yelled.

"Then you're not getting more you're livestock back., The king spat.

They argued like this for hours. I sat there bored out of my mind. This was so tedious. They would never decide on anything indefinitely.

"Ok then then how about a contest." The King said.

The Queen smiled. "Yes, and the winning team gets to decide the final outcome of the treaty."

"Yes, my idea exactly." The King was now standing a wicked smile on his face.

"The only fitting test would be the test of the two dragons." The Queen said.

I cringed. The test of the two dragons was a trek across the two kingdoms. One move from one side of the land of Chi to the other, go to all six temples of the dragons and retrieve one piece of gold from each of them. A suicidal mission for many reasons.


"Yes," The King said

They shook hand then picked the teams they would be sending on the dangerous mission. The first team back to the temple would decide the entire fait of the land of Chi.


*This is your direction, and my attempt to revive this storybook. Please post
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~




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*Hm, why not? :)*

[Jade]

I hung my arms around Brendon and Xander's necks, pulling them in. "Hey, we're gonna go out. Get the stuff. And kick some butt, got it?"

The girl across the table threw another glare at us. I stuck my tongue out and made faces until the two boys beside me pulled me away. Before turning around I made one more face and snicked---steam was practically shooting out of her ears.

I ran to the bridge that crossed a koi pong and stood in the middle with my arms raised up high. Then, with a deep breath, I shouted: "HEY! HO! LET'S GO!" A wide, almost sly smile stretched my face as Brendon joined in.
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
--William Dunbar




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*Sorry this took so long. From where Boltageman left off...*

Phaedra~
I had gone out there because I was looking for something. When I was flying I must have dropped it somewhere here. It was my necklace. I scanned the surroundings for it. It wouldn't be that hard to find... It would be glowing out here at the very least. I took in my setting before I walked anywhere. Tripping on a rock wouldn't be good. I had a knife dangerously hanging free by my side. A simple stagger and it would dig into my thigh.

I stepped onto a twig and jumped back nervously. That was the only sound in this damn forest. But no... a set of footsteps too. Why hadn't I noticed that before? I automatically checked down for the pendant that usually faithfully swung at my neck. Naturally it wasn't there. Looking down was an instinct.

"Who are you?" I asked. An edge to my voice. The form didn't answer, but it came closer into the sliver of moonlight. It was enough for me to see it, as well as it see me. It was distinctly a male human figure. "Who are you?" I repeated.
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~



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