Autumn's Blaze

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Cara:

Cara walked over to Fire and climbed on his back. He shot off into the air and she clung to him watching Christian's figure slowly fade out of view. Tears slipped down her eyes, she didn't know why. She wanted to go back and kiss him, but knew she needed to be urgent. She felt Fire stop and looked up. In front of them she saw two black mages on huge dragon like things.

"F-f-fire!" She whimpered.

"HOLD ON!" He growled as he shot off. She clung to his fur as he picked up speed again.



*tears, hope this works*
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Christian

I continued on. I couldn't look at the sky, I couldn't see Cara fly away. I still felt like I would never see her again.

Vomit curled in my stomach at the thought.
I just lost the game.




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Cara:

Cara screamed as something hit Fire sending her hurdling towards the ground. "FIRE!!!!!!!!!" She watched as one of the dragon's hit Fire with his tail sending him soaring through the air. The other dragon came down catching her roughly in it's claw. She pushed at it's claw trying to get free.


Fire:

Everything kept going black as Fire felt himself flying through the air. He had to find Cara, he had to help her. He felt himself hit the ground and everything went black.
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Christian

We went around a tree and found lying on the groud a wolf, but not just any wolf. it was Fire.

"Oh god no!"

Where was Cara? How far had they fallen?

My mind raced with unanswered questions that I needed to know.
I just lost the game.




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Fire:

Fire felt someone shaking him and he slowly opened his eyes seeing Christian. "Where's Cara?" He asked when he saw Fire's eyes open.

Dragons He managed to say in Christian's head before he passed out.

Cara:

Cara felt sick as they neared the ground. She clutched her eyes shut and started crying all over again.
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Ramere-

I turned to the others, who in turn were watching me with wide eyes, occasionally flicking their gazes towards the sky. Christian was flexing his wings, preparing to go after Cara.

I cursed quietly under my breath. This wasn't good. Cara was probably dead, or would soon be so. Either that, or she would be captured and tortured. If that roar belonged to the creature I thought it did, then we wouldn't have a chance of beating both a dragon and a mage. And what if there was more than one...?

All of those thoughts flew through my head in less than a second. I bit my lip, not knowing what to do. We could try to face the mage and dragon, and probably fail, or we could go and try to get help from the tower mages as well as any other mages from the nearby towns. Either way, we were looking at a war.

"Ramere, what do we do?" Christian asked, his voice strained with anger and despair.

"I...I don't-"

"Ramere!" he shouted, anger taking over. "What do we do!? Cara is up there!"

I rounded on him. "You tell me! I don't know what we're supposed to do! I. Don't. Know."

He stared at me blankly for a moment before lowering his eyes.

"I'm sorry."

I sighed and nodded before looking at the others. "What do you say? We can't risk taking the time to go to the tower now. We either go after Cara on our own or we go get help and risk her life even more."


**Alright friends, since this seems to be making a comeback, we need to do a bit of readjusting with the rules. Not much, only that your posts must be at least two paragraphs, and if they're not, you'd better have a good explanation. Sorry if that sounds harsh, but I don't want to see this die off again or turn into another of those cruddy storybooks with each post only a line long. We're all the original people from Autumn's Beginning, after all! Come on!
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****I agree, I'll try and do my best, but depending on how much time I have will tell you how long my post will be. I'm working at camp. So ya. :D****

Cara:

Cara felt her self tossed to the ground and the air was knocked out of her. She fought to get it back as both dragons landed next to her and their rider's dismounted walking over to her. She tried to pull herself up but she still could barely breath let alone get up quick enough to get away. Both of the riders were in long black capes which had hoods that covered their heads.

"I don't see how this....child could do any damage to our plan." One of them hissed.

"We were told to find her and take her to Him. No questions asked, though I would like to know why too. It had soemthing to do with information." The other said as they neared. One of them reached otu and yanked her up pulling her to her feet and looking her in the eyes. She found herself staring back into what looked like a never ending black pit.

"What do you have that will ruin the plan? You have to know what we are talking about." He hissed.

"I-I-I don't know." She whimpered. He shoved her back to the ground and she suddenly felt like she was chocking. Her hands went up to her throat, but nothing was there.

"Tell me."

"I-"

"Let her go, we aren't to hurt her." The other said stepping between her and the other guy.


Fire:

*nothing, have him wake up when you will*
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Christian

"I'm going after her," I said, "you guys go on that way and save the village." I bent down by Fire to wake him up, he'd definately be a help, even if its nothing more than running with Cara as fast as he could the other direction.

"You can't do this by yourself," Caspan said agast.

"I'm certiantly going to try. There isn't a chance that I'm going to leave her to them. Not when I have a small chance."

"You'll get yourself killed," Ramere insisted.

"I'll die fighting, protecting the woman I love." I shook Fire's shoulder hoping he'd wake up and still have the strength to fight. "Fire!"

He shot awake with a start. Where is she?

We're going to find her now.



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(No clue what to do for her, But It would be amazingly easier for me to do more than that every time if I had two characters.)
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Fire:

Then we must hurry, they are already ahead of us! Fire hissed. He stood up slowly pain flying through his muscles, he couldn't give up though, he had to find Cara.

Will you be able to make it?

Yes. He replied leaping into the air ignoring any pain and leaving no room for protest.


Cara:

Cara was thrown back on one of the dragons.

"We still have an hours ride to go. She'll be ready to talk when we get there. And if not, I'm sure we can find a way to get her to." One of the guys said. She shivered as he climbed behind her on the dragons back and tied her hands behind her back. "Be a good little girl and don't struggle." he growled.
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