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Hello, guys! :)

Would you like to see my recent work? >> Indonesian Ghost Mythology

Don't hesitate to give your constructive criticism, opinion and advice :) I'll reply as soon as possible :D

Warm regards,

Aulyasela3597




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Hi Lucrezia

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much




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Hey there, deleted30! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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